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Resolved issues:
Mental reference to Seishiro not being happy about the volunteered memorial service taking place.
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Subaru still thinking of Ijyuin's information on the way to the ceremony.
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Takamura noticing Subaru's unmemorialesque preoccupation.
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Smooth flow of injury and concern for Nokoru into the talk.
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Remaining (aside from entirely new scenes):
Seishiro observing Nokoru as (wired) chief mourner.
Kakyo (and Saiga) appearing in the audience or hiding in the bushes? Ah, always these decisions to be made about plot details!
Subaru arriving for the ceremony & Sei noticing his wrinkled shikifuku (lack of composure, too? y/n? Decision again! *sigh*)
...and I still want to polish the snippet about Sei testing a household appliance for Nokoru! ;)
Mental reference to Seishiro not being happy about the volunteered memorial service taking place.
CHECK
Subaru still thinking of Ijyuin's information on the way to the ceremony.
CHECK
Takamura noticing Subaru's unmemorialesque preoccupation.
CHECK
Smooth flow of injury and concern for Nokoru into the talk.
CHECK
Remaining (aside from entirely new scenes):
Seishiro observing Nokoru as (wired) chief mourner.
Kakyo (and Saiga) appearing in the audience or hiding in the bushes? Ah, always these decisions to be made about plot details!
Subaru arriving for the ceremony & Sei noticing his wrinkled shikifuku (lack of composure, too? y/n? Decision again! *sigh*)
...and I still want to polish the snippet about Sei testing a household appliance for Nokoru! ;)
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Date: 2012-07-02 06:02 (UTC)From:Also! I must thank you so much for recommending Lindsay Buroker's Emperor's Edge series. I've finally started in on it and, needless to say, I'm enjoying it a lot. I'm loving Amaranthe, which says a lot, cause I'm really picky about my heroines.
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Date: 2012-07-02 17:12 (UTC)From:Not as long as he would have liked, but long enough to get the memorial service and their trip to Okinawa (which he doesn't know about yet) out of the way.
Not yet decided, whether or not that's long enough to successfully prevent fratricide, though.
Well, my soft spot is more Sicarius, but then... it's hard to resist such a potent mix of Shane & Seishiro. ;)