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Dear all,

as you maybe (not) noticed, the last BAUplan update is from August, reporting on a required change of perspective. Unfortunately, soon after my real life also insisted on such a change as the university decided after 14 years not to extend my contract past the current project. Hence, instead of writing I ended up job hunting.
Yesterday, I received - and accepted - a job offer for a position at a federal institute. :D

Now I have at least the rest of the month free for (a) calming my frayed nerves from the last months and (b) writing TBX. So, if the aftermath of the stress doesn't get the better of me, expect updates!
akk: (Seishiro - Eyes in the Dark)
current chapter word count: 7138 (9/16 pages in continuous text) of which roughly 3000 words are new words, because I realized I needed "Window [censored]" in Seishiro's pov instead of Subaru's to fit into the story.
pov change completed? yes.
scenes to be written next: "on the hunt", is it always like this? (the gap on page 9 and later)
character not caring about sights: Seishiro
character managing to accidentally link paperwork and sex: Subaru
character asking in vain for a maboroshi: also Subaru
research of the day: wipes in 2000 Japan.

author comment: thanks to the pov change I now have a meaty outtake for BAU part 2...

quote of the day:
Seishiro reached for him mid-sentence, pulling him close. “So, you propose we become undone?”
akk: (Seishiro mit Shikigami)
current chapter word count: 6823 (9/16 pages in continuous text; one gap before this scene, hence...)
scene written today: on the hunt
scene completed? not yet
scene to be written next: closer to home
character learning about "normal" retiree shenanigans in Tokyo: Seishiro
character reconsidering his options: also Seishiro
research of today: distance between Tama, Tokyo and Gero, Gifu Prefecture; distance between Tama, Tokyo and Ichikawa, Chiba Prefecture, as the shikigami flies and by train; toll road operations in Japan (not needed); river flooding in Tokyo in y2k (yes, but six months too late for the story)
author's comment: this is one of the 'mechanical' scenes that read "meh" and everything is figured out and the text tightened accordingly. Let's hope that happens soon!

quote of the day:
“Keep the file, but exclude her from the immediate list,” Seishiro decided. “Move the other two up to prime targets. You usually don’t send a tatarigami across downtown without it being noticed. I need full files on all three in thirty minutes, and the address in Otsuka right now.”
akk: (Subaru - No!)
current chapter word count: 5848 (9/14 pages in continuous text)
scenes written today: working with Subaru, about Hokuto
scenes completed? yes, though "about Hokuto" is a scene that will see quite a bit of tinkering going forth to get it spot on. There's no leeway here, so even the chosen quote of the day may yet change.
scenes to be written next: is it always like this?, tatarigami mistress confrontation, reporting
character uncaring of purity but caring of pain: Yimura
character using the different meanings of living with: Subaru
research today: none, but the chapter is plotted through, albeit with gaps and some leeway here and there. The main reason that the continuous text still ends on page 9 is that I have yet to write Seishiro going after the tatarigami caller, whereas the following Subaru centric scenes are mostly written already.

quote of the day:
Subaru drew a deep breath and pushed himself off his chair. “I have to live with the fact that my sister committed suicide for me, and I can live with the Sakurazukamori who hurt me and abetted her to ensure the Final Battle remains undecided.” He headed for the door. “If you can’t, let me know and I’ll arrange for your return to Kyoto.”
akk: AKK - Schriftzug aus Blitzen (Default)
current chapter word count: 5324 (9/13 pages in continuous text)
scenes written today: Yimura's office, sensing the kill, about Hokuto (was: realization), report writing
scenes completed? you wish!
scenes to be written (next-ish): is it always like this?, working with Subaru, tatarigami mistress confrontation
character admitting to himself that he does exactly what his elders fear he does: Subaru
character finally getting recognized as what she was: Hokuto
characters embarrassed by her office size: Yimura
person who wishes to have more time for this: the author.

quote of the day:
“If it helps, the tatarigami would have killed Hasegawa without the active protection charm. Something I could only offer because I knew you’d be on the case immediately.”
Seishiro nodded. “Put that in your report. I’ll add a risk assessment to mine about what the tatarigami would have caused had it broken its tether.”
“Do we know its tether?” Subaru asked.
“Destroying Hasegawa.” Seishiro snorted. “My client was rather vocal about it.”
akk: AKK - Schriftzug aus Blitzen (Default)
no new update this weekend; I have quite a few scribbles about Subaru and Yimura interacting, but temperatures over here soared 15°C above what I'm comfortable with and my brain just fails to come up with meaningful sentences that actually express what I want to say; so - delay. It's supposed to cool down on Tuesday...

(I wrote "cook down on Tuesday"... Erk. I stop here.)
akk: (Seishiro - Hi Honey)
current chapter word count: 4642 (9/11 pages in continuous text)
scenes written today: Window [censored], Risk Assessment, Shisa approval & risqué and risk
scenes completed? Window was tweaked, RA and Shisa are more fleshed out, but not yet complete, R&R is almost complete, but all of them need more preparation in the still missing events beforehand that have been partially outlined today, but still aren't written.
scenes to be written next: is it always like this?, working with Subaru, tatarigami mistress confrontation, sensing the kill, realization
character not paying attention in his meeting because of underwear in his pocket: Seishiro
character deeply uncomfortable because of a missing piece of underwear: Subaru
character wondering about public transport usage: Seishiro
research for today: lines of sight between Kokyo, the Imperial Guards HQ, and Sakura Enterprises' location; building shadows in Tokyo in May at approx. 17:30; distance range of military grade binoculars

author's comment:
I originally planned to have the first touch of the Ijyeun thread in this part, but it increasingly looks that it will end up in the next part. There's so much going on already and window [censored] & co further expanding / complicating matters that it's either going to be twice the size it was supposed to be or going to be horribly cluttered. Both options are not appealing.

quote of the day:
“Shiibatani is probably furthering his education with binoculars.” Another stroke. “Right now.
akk: (Seishiro - Yes!)
current chapter word count: 4306 (9/11 pages in continuous text)
scenes written today: Window [censored], Risk Assessment, Shisa approval
scenes completed? Window is complete, RA and Shisa are outlined and partial, but all was written in one giant splurge at 4:30 a.m. and will need proper spellcheck, finetuning, and editing before being considered "done".
character thinking the window cleaners are paid too much: Seishiro
character believing the window cleaners deserve a pay rise: Subaru
character beginning to regret glass doors: also Subaru

quote of the day:
"I'm not an exhibitionist."
"The new decor on that window suggests otherwise."


author comment: if the content of these three scenes stay as they are in this part, then Case Assessments as a chapter will have earned the overall rating of the Decagram series for a change.
akk: (Seishiro - shadow in the night)
current chapter word count: 3652 (9/9 pages continuous text)
scenes written today: tracking down Subaru, talking shop
scenes completed? yes.
scenes to be written next: Yimura wondering about the weird phone requests, Seishiro on the job, Subaru back in Kasumigaseki, Akechi-interim
character getting a verbal case report: Seishiro
character risking more because of the OMR: Subaru
research of the day: electronic car lock systems built in the 1990s; parking options near Chofu station

quote of the day:
"It’s Yimura’s first day, and I better have a word with Orito-kun.”
“He might be too busy for that. I demanded him to restore the data or personally report to our respective ministries about its loss.” Seishiro’s smile had a distinct edge. “Last time I saw him, he was frantically talking on the phone for a change.”
akk: (Seishiro - Yes!)
current chapter word count: 2925 (6/7 continuous pages)
scenes written today: tracking down Subaru, can you talk?
scenes completed? nope, too much research needed
character having done his job not just since yesterday: Seishiro
character getting a reminder of what that means: Subaru
research of the day: train schedule around midday on weekdays between Tama New Town and Kasumigaseki, traveling time between Keio-Inadazutsumi Station and Chofu Station, platform design at Keio-Inadazutsumi, exits of and parking lots at Chofu station (Keio line) [up until here a big YAY for Google route planning & streetview, as well as screen capture & OneNote pls]; 1970s racing animes - Machine Hiryu, Dash Machine Hayabusa, Mach GoGoGo [and no, I don't care for racing animes - they're just boring]

quote of the day:
Subaru blinked at the sight of the blue sedan parking near the train station exit. “How come your car’s here and not at the previous—?”
Seishiro laughed. “Because I didn't just start doing this job yesterday.”
akk: (Seishiro - chewing on glasses)
current chapter word count: 2531 (6/6 pages continuous text)
scenes written today: "are you kidding me?!"
scenes completed? yes.
scenes to be written next: tracking down Subaru
character having a temper: Seishiro
character having a bad day: Sumeragi Orito
characters ordered to bear witness: Namane and Yimura
research of the day: public transport and expressway connections between Tama New Town and Kasumigaseki, family names in Tokyo

quote of the day 1:
“I do not contact a client, Orito-kun,” Seishiro reminded him.
“I don’t see how excessive information about the neighborhood and living circumstances will help with that. I—”
“Do you think you will leave this building if I explain that to you?”

quote of the day 2:
“They deleted four person days of work for an unclosed case. Let them realize what that means before we get a file consisting of ‘Suzuki in Tokyo’.”
akk: (Seishiro - Yes!)
current chapter word count: 2027 (5/6 pages in continuous text)
scenes written today: arrival of the secretary, "are you kidding me?!"
scenes completed? Arrival is done, "are you kidding me?!" is to come
scenes to come next: "are you kidding me?!"
character having second thoughts: Yimura
character proving more capable than hoped: also Yimura
character having a temper: Seishiro
character considering decimating the less competent OMR staff: also Seishiro
research of the day: computer OSes in 2000 Japan; TRON kernel options

quote of the day 1:
“Yes, but it’s been two years since I actually used a computer.” At Namane’s surprised look, she added apologetically, “my house insists on… more traditional communication methods.” That earned her what could only be described as a snort and muttered ‘I know.’ “Is there a manual I may use?”

quote of the day 2:
“If they try to purify me, they will need a mop for themselves!”
akk: (Seishiro - Throwing Glasses)
current chapter word count: 1608 (3/5 pages continuous text)
scenes written today: Tama New Town case, "Are you kidding me?!"
scenes completed? Tama New Town case (at least Subaru's part in it)
character being glad for cheap tea: Subaru
character about to learn more about 1970s car racing anime than he ever wanted to know: Seishiro
research for today: spiritual concepts of tea (not tea leaves or tea ceremony), tatarigami and noryo definitions

quote of the day:

"That was one of the two people not to piss off in this business." He heard Namane saying behind him.
"Who's the other one?" Subaru's secretary asked quietly.
"Your boss--" The door closed.
akk: Subaru showing the marks in X (Subaru - showing the marks in X)
current chapter word count: 1283
scenes written today: Tama New Town case, new secretary
scenes completed? you wish! The tatarigami still has to show up - secretary started because it's happening parallel to Tama New Town case (avoids boring fillers)
character whose shikigami hovers over kitchen knives: Subaru
character losing patience with OMR personnel: Seishiro
character confusing Subaru's new secretary: also Seishiro
character not bothering to wait: Seishiro again

quote of the day:
“I have Sumeragi-sama's pager number, sir,” she said quietly. “I will page him to call in.”
“Unnecessary,” Seishiro told her, grabbing his coat. “I’ll find him.”
akk: (Seishiro - chewing on glasses)
current chapter word count: 900 (hopefully more to come this weekend)
scenes written today: Tama New Town case
scenes completed? you wish!
character musing about cramped flats & mecha anime parodies: Subaru
character who ought to carry a phone: also Subaru
research for the day: Toei animation productions in the 1970s

quote of the day:
“Sakura Enterprises.”
Subaru pressed his hand over his free ear to block some of the noise. “Namane-san? This is Sumeragi Subaru. The job at Toei apartments is partially your business. Somebody just sicced a tatarigami on my client.”

Work life basically eats up my time since March - and that will likely last into Autumn, but I'm determined to squeeze in writing time at weekends - if only to keep my sanity...
...not sure what it says about my sanity that I have to write about carnivorous cherry trees to keep it. ;-)
akk: AKK - Schriftzug aus Blitzen (Default)
current chapter word count: 421 (mostly scribbles)
scenes planned in order: Tama New Town case for Subaru, arrival of the secretary, Tatarigami are no accident, data deletion before closing of cases leads to incomplete data available, Subaru still has the data, Akechi musings (interlude).
scenes planned but not yet sorted in: customer verification issue, why are they ogling me?, first contact family, suicide case for Seishiro
character preferring his colleague's summaries: Subaru
character needing new shoes: Subaru's secretary
research for the day: Tama New City, Toei Atago complex, aging suburb population problem, tatarigami

quote of the day:
"With all due respect," the Sumeragi attendant huffed. "We never record that information about our customers. We respect our clients' privacy!"
"And we do not work for unverified customers!"
akk: AKK - Schriftzug aus Blitzen (Default)
current chapter word count: 14383 (given that I'll be mostly polishing existing scenes for the rest of the part, I don't think the word count changes will be very illuminating, so I'll continue posting completed pages from now on)
current page: 24 / 31
scenes adapted: returning from lunch (now with more cats)
scenes coming next: Omi waiting, wharf report, involving "the other office"
character who may have to change the color of his clothing to match the pets: Seishiro
character wondering about waiting benches for wary colleagues on the parking lot: Subaru
unexpected side-effect of today's editing: a snippet involving Cleopatra, the albino python, and a semi-permanent connection with a radiator (didn't make it into the story, but who knows - may end up as a TB-timed side story eventually)

quote of the day:
“[The ambassadors] shed on me, remember?” He glanced down at his right trouser hem still sporting a few off-white sparkles.
Subaru chuckled. “What is it with you and foot-fetishizing cats?”
“Don't remind me,” Seishiro grumbled as they crossed the corner of their building.
akk: AKK - Schriftzug aus Blitzen (Default)
current chapter word count: 14342
scenes written: return from lunch (small but crucial, closing the last gap to the scenes that only need polishing) & report by form (needs polishing but is a fitting closure for this chapter)
scenes to be polished: all the rest between the two written today of course (currently 6 A4 pages)

AAAAND...
I'm almost done writing one of the side stories to Family Matters: "Domiciliary Visit" - about how Suoh ended up grumpy but alive. It's currently at 980 words and I judge it to end up between 1500 and 2000 words in total. Depending on how tomorrow works out writing-wise (and if I can keep myself from diving deeper into the yin/yang aspects of Traditional Chinese Medicine for it), it might end up on the AO3 tomorrow, if I'm not too scared to do that without having it betaed, that is.

quote of the day (from DV):
“Really, Taka-chan,” he addressed the unconscious man on the bed, “you should have accepted Subaru-kun’s help. If you were a dog, you’d have been put down already.”

p.s.: in case you miss me on Discord these days - it's currently too lively for me to keep track even remotely. :-)
akk: AKK - Schriftzug aus Blitzen (Default)
current chapter word count: 14211 (up from 12926)
continuous text: all 30 of 30 pages (yay)
text that still needs adaptation / polishing: page 24ff
scenes completed: Tree-san's opinion of the Pine's ambassadors, file reception, bypassing the OMR, food court (I may yet decide to expand the conversation)
scenes written but in need of adapting or additional transition scenes: Omi reporting in, Involving the other office, on the wharf, catholic composite ghost
scenes to be written: a solid end for the chapter - CCG isn't suitable for that.
research needed this time: Japanese seals, Tokyo Public Prosecution Office & District Court, Gyudon recipes

quote of the day:
“Pint-sized ambassadors roaming Subaru-kun’s office hardly qualify as intruders,” Seishiro answered the Tree, while cleaning his seal. “I could trap them in a honey jar without reducing their size.”
…Precedent… the Tree warned in his mind. …always carries a seed of confrontation…
akk: (Subaru - No!)
current chapter word count: 12926 (up from 11113) on 21/28 A4 pages
scenes written: Case files in the morning, The Ambassadors, Representative removal, finding a secretary (all complete)
scenes to be written next: incoming SKZM case (not even scribbles on that one, just the reference materials marked), Omi reporting on problems with warding the wharf (almost complete scene, needs mostly mild adaptations), involving "the other office" (ditto), invading the wharf (ditto), catholic composite ghost (ditto).
character having more of a temper than expected from everybody: Subaru
character having plans for lunch: Seishiro
character being reminded of the capabilities of "the other office": Tomoaki
research needed this time: haraegushi, Okinawan pottery, Babylon (the 2019 anime series based on the novels バビロン by Mado Nozaki).

This chapter took a harsher turn than initially planned, so quite a few of the more comical scenes had to be rewritten, revamped, or ended up on my "for the outtakes" list. Esp. those involving elder Tomoaki's antics. Sadly. I also have yet to decide if Subaru's secretary starts working in this chapter or the next. It will mostly depend on where to cut the plot on demons nicely.

Quote(s) of the day (one for each completed scene):

“Would you mind fetching the car today?” Subaru asked, closing the lid of the second box. “These turned out quite heavy.”
Seishiro smirked. “What do I get for the effort?”
“Not having to haul one of these across the park to Ueno Station.”


A gift from Okinawa, Ameru’s elegant penmanship was easily recognizable to him by now, the lion to scare evil away, and the lioness to protect the good. [...] Prowling across his desk, they looked like miniature versions of the Pine’s Guardians—
Seishiro picked up the phone on the first ring. “Yes?”
“I believe the Pine sent ambassadors,” Subaru told him.


“It’s good to see you at least physically hale after your ordeal.”
“Ordeal?” Subaru asked, exasperated. “I was on Okinawa.”
“Very recommendable beaches.” Seishiro confirmed, adding casually, “also a lot fewer relatives barging in on us unannounced.” Tomoaki swung the haraegushi at him. Seishiro brushed the offending paper wand out of his face. “Aim that at me again and
you will be an impurity in this office.”

“I don’t need a gifted onmyoji,” he told her bluntly, “I need somebody who’ll work next to a connected phone and dares answering it when it rings. Somebody to handle office communications with the Sakurazuka without exorcising every slip of paper in the building.” He drew a deep breath, calming himself. “Can you do that?”

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