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within Interregnum 6
Chapter 17 contained a couple of problems: most notable an awfully repetitive scene start (Subaru's morning meal with granny S.) and a not quite "hitting the spot" (sex with Sei; pun intended). I consider both scenes improved (no, not mpreg) now, though final verdict remains until having reread it on paper with a fresh head (again, not mpreg, don't worry).
Luckily, the list of issues on my "memory board" did not lengthen during this chapter. However, I think that chapter 18 will have to address at least the forgotten MetroGov job, otherwise... *eep*
Not sure what I do with Nokoru. Probably a scenitty in IR 6?
within Interregnum 6
Chapter 17 contained a couple of problems: most notable an awfully repetitive scene start (Subaru's morning meal with granny S.) and a not quite "hitting the spot" (sex with Sei; pun intended). I consider both scenes improved (no, not mpreg) now, though final verdict remains until having reread it on paper with a fresh head (again, not mpreg, don't worry).
Luckily, the list of issues on my "memory board" did not lengthen during this chapter. However, I think that chapter 18 will have to address at least the forgotten MetroGov job, otherwise... *eep*
Not sure what I do with Nokoru. Probably a scenitty in IR 6?
