FM-PMS (state of the edit)

[akk]

current frontline: 124/207 (~60%)
to be continued with chapter 14

surprisingly little to be changed. A few de-o-ing of fuda, mostly. Harmless (except for the content, of course *EG*).

Comments

[shirogiku.livejournal.com]

I was just exaggerating >.> Ugh, just grinding ink is an effort, no wonder Seishiro goes for marker pens.

I do vaguely remember them shopping for special paper in FM.

Do write it :D I love the side stories, especially the one in which Seishiro killed with his fluXD

Seishiro, the MacGyver of fuda sounds about right and absolutely hilarious. Don't tell me he made fuda or a talisman from a sock? 0.o :D

[akk]

:-) Their different working styles are going to be a major "chafing point" in Business As Usual, once the initial "Golden Week chapter" is over, which is why I don't think I'll put the sock event into a side story. It will most likely appear in the main plot (and it's a white tabi sock from Subaru. Seishiro's suit socks are black, difficult to write on that).

But there's a snippet about them arguing about the money spent on groceries, which keeps ongoing because "a certain someone abused the shopping receipt without noting down the sum". Maybe... but no promises. Editing is first now. :)

[shirogiku.livejournal.com]

Even their socks have the owners personalities)))

Okay, okay, note to self: patience is a virtue.

[akk]

Even their socks have the owners personalities)))
*g* at least CLAMP drew them that way. :-)