FM-PMS

[akk]

current chapter word count: 4355
scenes worked on today: The Consultation (Outro) merged with the After Talk
scenes done? mostly (a bit of tinkering and polishing is left to do).
revised scene structure: Sakura at Night (including Morning Call) - "I'm worried" and "How's the tummy?" - The Consultation (including AfterTalk) - {TwinStarFuma and Kamui (Arrival, Confrontation, Analysis)} - Five days later: Seishiro - {Five days later: Subaru and Kamui} [complete, >50% done, {<50% done}]
character scheming behind his clients back: Subaru
character putting some things into the picture: Nokoru
character finally getting to ask "the question": again Subaru
surprisingly useful sub-location for intimate conversation: unbugged back stairs
quote of the day: "We weren't exactly sober at that time."

Comments

[killthwight]

Outro?

"We weren't exactly sober at that time." LOL, I have difficulty imagining Seishirou drunk, and so I'm super curious as to how he managed to get drunk with Nokoru. As the Americans would say, the scene would have been awesome!

[akk]

"Outro" is basically the end of a scene leading on to the next one. Kind of the opposite of an "Intro". :)

Nokoru refers to an event in their college years - a certain argument about lemons in dry martinis that has been referenced before. Basically, there are two main recipes for dry martinis, both of which can be served either with a slice of lemon on the rim, a piece of lemon (or lemon peel) in, or without any lemon at all. However, there's a long lasting argument, which variant is a _real_ dry martini (and which isn't). Given that the basic recipe is somewhere between 16 and 20 vol. per cent of alcohol content and there are 8 variants... *eg*
They might have found a solution, but they certainly weren't in a condition to remember it (and the next three days prevented them from ever repeating the experiment *eg*).

[killthwight]

Hmm, I have to pay more attention to these snippets next time I reread, then. I just hope Subaru never gets to experience a hung over Seishirou,that's probably the scariest thing in Japan. XD

Thanks for the explanation, the word threw me off the first time I saw it because it means another or other in Portuguese, and that made no sense. I had never seen it before in English, glad to learn a new word. :)

[akk]

I'm not sure "outro" is a proper word. It's just something that came to mind when describing the opposite of an intro. I admit, I never checked whether or not it exists. :)

Actually, the "morning after the argument with the dry martinis" was mentioned in chapter 16, but it's just a made up background detail kept in mind for continuity.