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less because I deleted "Driving in the Rain", "Takeshi" (the scene, not the character!), and "from the parking lot into the house"
because (1) I realized that (a) the scenes consisted solely of elaborate filling stuff and (b) drove the plot against a wall (and glued it there).
because (2) accepting secondary character POVs will allow for a distinctly more concise and poignant presentation of the truly important part of the plot (without the aforementioned fillers)
characters likely to gain perspective: Nokoru and either Iyjuin Shigetoshi or Akechi Shigetaka. TSF optional.
characters for once being critical observed: Seishiro and Subaru
characters having to appear yet: Kamui and the TSF
because of the ice cream
quote of the day (1): "I don't think the Twin Star is as lethal as he was last year."
quote of the day (2): "I wasn't speaking about the Twin Star."
less because I deleted "Driving in the Rain", "Takeshi" (the scene, not the character!), and "from the parking lot into the house"
because (1) I realized that (a) the scenes consisted solely of elaborate filling stuff and (b) drove the plot against a wall (and glued it there).
because (2) accepting secondary character POVs will allow for a distinctly more concise and poignant presentation of the truly important part of the plot (without the aforementioned fillers)
characters likely to gain perspective: Nokoru and either Iyjuin Shigetoshi or Akechi Shigetaka. TSF optional.
characters for once being critical observed: Seishiro and Subaru
characters having to appear yet: Kamui and the TSF
because of the ice cream
quote of the day (1): "I don't think the Twin Star is as lethal as he was last year."
quote of the day (2): "I wasn't speaking about the Twin Star."
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Date: 2010-08-31 07:42 (UTC)From:Also glad that it works out. I already have two pages in scribbles for the scene parts that had me biting my nails for the past 3 weeks!