FM-PMS

[akk]

current chapter word count: 3249
less because I deleted "Driving in the Rain", "Takeshi" (the scene, not the character!), and "from the parking lot into the house"
because (1) I realized that (a) the scenes consisted solely of elaborate filling stuff and (b) drove the plot against a wall (and glued it there).
because (2) accepting secondary character POVs will allow for a distinctly more concise and poignant presentation of the truly important part of the plot (without the aforementioned fillers)
characters likely to gain perspective: Nokoru and either Iyjuin Shigetoshi or Akechi Shigetaka. TSF optional.
characters for once being critical observed: Seishiro and Subaru
characters having to appear yet: Kamui and the TSF
because of the ice cream
quote of the day (1): "I don't think the Twin Star is as lethal as he was last year."
quote of the day (2): "I wasn't speaking about the Twin Star."

Comments

[primera]

ooo this makes me so excited! one of my fav things in fic is to see the people who are like the main characters and central focus and usually providing the pov-- to have them observed from a third person's pov. and its esp. interesting with seishiro and subaru, who are kind in their own little world, lol.

[akk]

Glad you like the idea.

Also glad that it works out. I already have two pages in scribbles for the scene parts that had me biting my nails for the past 3 weeks!