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scene worked on today: "When did you plan to tell me?!"
worked on because: Seishiro was too much of a wimp! (yes, you read that right: wimp!)
scene corrected? plot-wise, yes, but there's more clean-up to do now
character finally thinking of his own ass first: Seishiro
character fearing it might be a different ass he thinks of: Subaru
quote of the day: "I have no reason to go after *her*, but her daughter might come after *me*!"
scene worked on today: "When did you plan to tell me?!"
worked on because: Seishiro was too much of a wimp! (yes, you read that right: wimp!)
scene corrected? plot-wise, yes, but there's more clean-up to do now
character finally thinking of his own ass first: Seishiro
character fearing it might be a different ass he thinks of: Subaru
quote of the day: "I have no reason to go after *her*, but her daughter might come after *me*!"
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Date: 2009-12-05 21:39 (UTC)From:Eh... characterization vs. plot... a hard call and one best if there are punches thrown on both sides' behalf. No? Best of luck to you (and cohesion). Maybe you can call it a draw. XD
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Date: 2009-12-05 21:40 (UTC)From: (Anonymous)no subject
Date: 2009-12-05 21:44 (UTC)From:Don't worry about the typo. It's heading for 11 pm over here. I wouldn't have noticed it, if you hadn't pointed it out. :)