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BAUplan - Ameru's edits
2019-06-09 17:41current chapter word count: 13251
scenes worked on today: almost all of them (due to Ameru's bean-spilling), plus said bean-spilling
result (1): Ameru's bean spilling will definitely stay (everything else is just too bland now).
result (2): I to figure out how the heck Subaru would react to (a) knowing to have a living parent and (b) a half-brother all of a sudden.
author realization: I have no clue about result (2). Dang.
excerpt (1):
"Your elders and my section leaders are rather united in their opinion about the OMR." Seishiro told him. "Right now, I have a blade at my peoples' throat, but it gets duller by the minute. Normally, I'd be flattered that my involvement is seen as more important than the Tenno's, but they're wasting time."
"Time we don't have," Subaru added.
excerpt (2):
"Because I should have refused them when they forced me to leave my family twenty years ago. I should have questioned that prophecy that had them send me away to father a child out of wedlock. Instead I obeyed." An angry huff. "I'm done obeying them."
scenes worked on today: almost all of them (due to Ameru's bean-spilling), plus said bean-spilling
result (1): Ameru's bean spilling will definitely stay (everything else is just too bland now).
result (2): I to figure out how the heck Subaru would react to (a) knowing to have a living parent and (b) a half-brother all of a sudden.
author realization: I have no clue about result (2). Dang.
excerpt (1):
"Your elders and my section leaders are rather united in their opinion about the OMR." Seishiro told him. "Right now, I have a blade at my peoples' throat, but it gets duller by the minute. Normally, I'd be flattered that my involvement is seen as more important than the Tenno's, but they're wasting time."
"Time we don't have," Subaru added.
excerpt (2):
"Because I should have refused them when they forced me to leave my family twenty years ago. I should have questioned that prophecy that had them send me away to father a child out of wedlock. Instead I obeyed." An angry huff. "I'm done obeying them."
