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[akk]

current chapter word count: 6932
scenes worked on today: Sei vs. Akiko, Granny Talk 2
scenes completed? sadly, not yet :(
character finally seeing beneath the veil: Subaru
character not being his self-less self: also Subaru (Kali sure does come in handy sometimes)
character not being as deadly as he wants to be: Seishiro (being p.c. certainly sucks)
quote of the day: "Then how come you are still alive?"

Comments

[jjblue1.insanejournal.com]

I know I'm probably being annoying but, each time you write 'Sei vs. Akiko' I feel tempted to ask what's the result of the match as of now... as if it was a box match or a soccer game of some sort who's being played right now... ^_^;

[akk.insanejournal.com]

*g*
actually, it is a kind of confrontation on very different levels.
Unfortunately, my original layout for the scene doesn't work for various reasons (mostly stuff done differently than intended in earlier chapters), which is why S vs. A currently undergoes a strict revision. It might even be that the title doesn't fit it in the end any more, but these scene titles are mostly my "not to get lost in my own script"-markers, so they might not be as descriptive as you may like them to be. :)

Actually, this chapter is a revision nightmare - too much dear scenes have to be revamped for it to work. *sigh* Frustrating.

[jjblue1.insanejournal.com]

I figured but somehow in my mind it's morphing a series of humorous moments with them in a chibi form smiling at each other politely and throwing stuffs at each other when the others aren't looking or things like that to then pretend they're on their best behaviour when Subaru happens to look in their direction...
Don't mind me, I knew I shouldn't have drawn people in chibi form, expecially Yuko-san... this must be some sort of form of Sakanagi or Yuko's payback... -_-;
Sadly I know the feeling way too well and yes, it's truly frustrating to have the scene perfectly written in your mind, be about to put it on paper and then you realize... IT DOESN'T FIT ANYMORE!
It's the kind of moment in which people prefers to be away from me...
But I'm sure after the revision they'll turn out very good!

[akk.insanejournal.com]

I recall vaguely a fic where the DoE and DoH were turned into chibis. I still picture chibi!Sei in his dark blue sakura blossom pyjamas...
*ow*(!)

I'm sure after the revision they'll turn out very good!

Thank you. But revisions take eternities, because it takes so much time to get used to the revised parts. *growl*