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[akk]

current chapter word count: 6678
scene worked on today: Seishiro vs. Akiko
scene done? not yet, (25% of it are still missing)
character being his most obnoxious self again: Seishiro
character not being aware of her situation: Akiko
character worrying about all the wrong things: Subaru
quote of the day: "I'll take the risk."

Unrelated side note: shredding old CDRs is FUN! It's noisy, splinters, sounds like somebody is wielding a chain saw, and flashes blue lights! Almost as good as using a 266nm Laser to burn a hole through the wall!

Comments

[jjblue1.insanejournal.com]

LOL
The Seishiro vs. Akiko bit gave me the mental picture of the two of them having a cat fight about Subaru... which I assume is highly unlikely... maybe I should quit staying up so late... :P

[akk.insanejournal.com]

:) It is one of the trickiest scenes to write.

Funnily, your idea and astra's idea (http://akk.insanejournal.com/123959.html?thread=116535#t116535) combined come pretty close. ;)

[jjblue1.insanejournal.com]

Now you're giving me mental pictures of Seishiro's making snide remarks at the poor girl... who would smile politely in his direction and pour hot tea all over his head... saying 'sorry, due to my lack of deep perception I think I missed the cup...'

[akk.insanejournal.com]

Actually, no. That's much too nice. ;)

[jjblue1.insanejournal.com]

Now you're making me worry... what's much too nice, my guess or her real reaction? (and it was like that Akiko poisoned Seishiro's tea and become the next Sakurazukamori... okay so my fantasy is running rampant...)

[akk.insanejournal.com]

Tsk. I don't write soap operas! ;)

[astra.insanejournal.com]

ah, i can't wait to see the dynamics of having the sakurazukamori in the sumeragi stronghold. xD especially this akiko and seishirou confrontation, course the first thing that comes to mind is seishirou sipping tea and giving akiko a mocking smile while making pointed comments, though i'm not sure how well akiko (i'm guessing she's a reserved traditionalist type bride?) will handle a verbal sparring with seishirou.....

[akk.insanejournal.com]

Actually, Seishiro is not quite at his best (yet) - or the whole thing would end in a complete fiasco. (Though Lady Sumeragi might want to differ about the possibility of "not ending in a fiasco" implied in this.)

"Seishiro vs. Akiko" is one of the trickiest scenes to write and I'm not 100% sure, it won't surprise me in the end. But my original plan for it is - funnily - pretty close to your idea combined with jjblue1's here (http://akk.insanejournal.com/123959.html?thread=116279#t116279)