FM-PMS

[akk]

current chapter word count: 5126
work done: sorting scenes for a) chronological order, b) evolving feelings to achieve 1) logical flow and 2) less pov switches, resulting in
amount of chapter considered done: 40 - 50 % (discounting two gaps and finetuning)
parts still to be done entirely: 6 (Arresting Subaru, Omi's home visit of hell, Sumeragi Elders Con, Peeping Ameru, Tree Talk)
parts still needing work: 4 (Videoconf, Michiko vs. Mori, Interrogation with Kali, New Job)
parts mostly done: 4 (Waking Up 1, Drink & Fuck, Hotel White House, Gossiping Cops )
quote of the day: "Not yet."

Comments

[akk.insanejournal.com]

"Your mini updates are so fun"

Happy you like them.

Well, 16 is certainly trying for Subaru. He made a decision in 15 of which the consequences are only now revealing itself.

Re: Seishiro. That's on purpose. I try to write FM-PMS without (major) spoilers, after all. :)

[sabriel75.insanejournal.com]

Yeah... you love to be cruel like that! Although I hear some people really don't like spoilers. Hmmm...

[akk.insanejournal.com]

To avoid spoileritis _and_ trying to be less cruel:
there is one character within Family Matters (hint: large, old, partially pink, decidedly ironic) who gave a clear answer about Seishiro in chapter 15. And while It loves to be twisted and obscure, It doesn't lie outright about things that matter.

:)

[sabriel75.insanejournal.com]

Ahhh... But I had already caught that little appeasement for Subaru. Yeah... I just wanted to reassure you that your subtlety is appreciated by those of us, who like to read in-depth, thought-provoking and occasionally what the heck is going on plots :)