FM-PMS

[akk]

current chapter word count: 5126
work done: sorting scenes for a) chronological order, b) evolving feelings to achieve 1) logical flow and 2) less pov switches, resulting in
amount of chapter considered done: 40 - 50 % (discounting two gaps and finetuning)
parts still to be done entirely: 6 (Arresting Subaru, Omi's home visit of hell, Sumeragi Elders Con, Peeping Ameru, Tree Talk)
parts still needing work: 4 (Videoconf, Michiko vs. Mori, Interrogation with Kali, New Job)
parts mostly done: 4 (Waking Up 1, Drink & Fuck, Hotel White House, Gossiping Cops )
quote of the day: "Not yet."

Comments

[sakurakira.insanejournal.com]

Well this certainly looks like it's going to be an "interesting" chapter for Subaru. Sakanagi, being arrested, dealing with elders (from both clans it seems), and only you know how poor Seishirou is doing at this point.

Your mini updates are so fun :D.

[akk.insanejournal.com]

"Your mini updates are so fun"

Happy you like them.

Well, 16 is certainly trying for Subaru. He made a decision in 15 of which the consequences are only now revealing itself.

Re: Seishiro. That's on purpose. I try to write FM-PMS without (major) spoilers, after all. :)

[sabriel75.insanejournal.com]

Yeah... you love to be cruel like that! Although I hear some people really don't like spoilers. Hmmm...

[akk.insanejournal.com]

To avoid spoileritis _and_ trying to be less cruel:
there is one character within Family Matters (hint: large, old, partially pink, decidedly ironic) who gave a clear answer about Seishiro in chapter 15. And while It loves to be twisted and obscure, It doesn't lie outright about things that matter.

:)

[sabriel75.insanejournal.com]

Ahhh... But I had already caught that little appeasement for Subaru. Yeah... I just wanted to reassure you that your subtlety is appreciated by those of us, who like to read in-depth, thought-provoking and occasionally what the heck is going on plots :)