FM-PMS

[akk]

items removed from 15: kekkai, a Seal, an Angel, a computer, a ghost army
items added to 15: mantras to Kali, azaleas, a cardboard box
resulting in... a conciser, more dramatic plot flow with a nicely active, non-repetitive Subaru!
resulting in... two major scenes back on the "to be tinkered"-list, because they were virtually redone today
resulting in... Subaru likely being arrested for murder in chapter 16
resulting in... two new scenes in chapter 16, rising its word count to 1500+ already.
research of the day: azaleas, rhododendrons, their flowering times, colors, and floristic meanings.
quote of the day: "I take that as a 'yes'."

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[sakurakira.insanejournal.com]

resulting in... Subaru likely being arrested for murder in chapter 16

Uh... O_O. Looking forward to reading!

[mithrigil.insanejournal.com]

a cardboard box

::risks a gamer joke::

...Snake? --SNAKE!

[akk.insanejournal.com]

???

[mithrigil.insanejournal.com]

--gah, that's twice today I'm showing my roots.

In the Metal Gear Solid games, when the protagonist, Snake, hides in a cardboard box he becomes invisible (http://www.green-ginger.net/blog/archives/images/MGS-box.jpg).

Apologies for oblique humor.

[akk.insanejournal.com]

I fear my cardboard box is a less advanced model being used for much more profane things than as a replacement for Alberich's functional headdress... ;)

[mithrigil.insanejournal.com]

Ah, so it's a Pornhelm, not a Tarnhelm.

::grins::

(Well, probably not, but this joke I think crosses the language barrier.)

[akk.insanejournal.com]

It's PH for sure. At least, since the-Big-A added the vibrational function (and the beer holder)! *eg*

[sakanagi.insanejournal.com]

Subaru arrested? Well. It'll be interesting to see how the police decide on that.

research of the day: azaleas, rhododendrons, their flowering times, colors, and floristic meanings.

Goodness, a lot of research goes into Family Matters. But that's a good thing. ^^

[akk.insanejournal.com]

Subaru arrested? Well. It'll be interesting to see how the police decide on that.

Oh, they have a pretty solid case when they decide to bring him in. So... ;)

Goodness, a lot of research goes into Family Matters.

Don't remind me. I still have to look up the schedule of Tokyo Metro Chiyoda Line...