As usual when sending a file to ![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
solo for beta-ing, a few days later I spot (a) how to improve the ending and (b) how to include the outtake I regretted deleting, resulting in the
real pre-edit word count: 22534 (previously 20651) on 44 A4 pages (previously 40).
number of major outtakes: 0 (Yup! Spiritual Spelunking is in, albeit in a streamlined version with less speleologist admonishments!)
major deviations from planned plot: unchanged
oh, and now there's more purple and less orange, a right instead of a left hand, and clams associated with sakura. ;)
Stay tuned!
solo for beta-ing, a few days later I spot (a) how to improve the ending and (b) how to include the outtake I regretted deleting, resulting in thereal pre-edit word count: 22534 (previously 20651) on 44 A4 pages (previously 40).
number of major outtakes: 0 (Yup! Spiritual Spelunking is in, albeit in a streamlined version with less speleologist admonishments!)
major deviations from planned plot: unchanged
oh, and now there's more purple and less orange, a right instead of a left hand, and clams associated with sakura. ;)
Stay tuned!
no subject
Date: 2019-10-26 14:14 (UTC)From: (Anonymous)Ruth