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Title: Family Matters (Sequel to 36°)
Rating: "Family Matters" as a whole is rated NC-17 for violence, crime, occultism, sexual connotations, alternative lifestyles, and a vocal tree having issues. Single chapters may be less restricted.
Characters: Subaru, Seishiro, Tree-san, Lady Sumeragi, (the CCD & X-cast)
Pairings: Sei/Su, (T/Sei)
Genre: drama, history, cont
Words: 148.110
Betaed by: [personal profile] solo
Comments: As a direct sequel it may not make sense unless you know "36°".
Summary: The second story of the Decagram (Sequel to 36°) -- Preventing the End of the World caused some side-effects Subaru is ill-prepared to deal with on his own.
Status: complete

Links:
Family Matters (edited) as PDF [1.64 MB, text-only] on my homepage.
Family Matters (edited) on the AO3 fanfic archive (downloadable in ebook format).

Please note: Family Matters saw some serious editing after it was finished in individual blog posts at the end of December 2010.

Date: 2013-02-17 16:33 (UTC)From: (Anonymous)
Oh how lovely!
Downloading and looking very much forward to (re)reading!
Ruth

Date: 2013-02-17 16:56 (UTC)From: [personal profile] etern
etern: (Default)
😃😊yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy am off to read!

Date: 2013-02-17 18:43 (UTC)From: [personal profile] celestiella
Aw man, and JUST when my vacation is over. :(
But I'll re-read it for sure, am curious about changes made through editing!

Date: 2013-02-18 17:30 (UTC)From: [personal profile] celestiella
I'll read it when I can. Am looking forward to see memorial service and other stuff! =D

Date: 2013-02-17 19:41 (UTC)From: [personal profile] japanimecrazed
japanimecrazed: Yukina, totally clueless. (Default)
Yay! I'm super excited to read this. I just have to find the time. :)

Date: 2013-02-17 21:23 (UTC)From: [personal profile] primera
primera: (Default)
whoaaaaaa!!! First of all congratulations :) second of all, thank you!! I know what I'm gonna be doing tonight.

Date: 2013-02-18 01:55 (UTC)From: [personal profile] etern
etern: (Default)
just finished rereading. I loved the new edits! :) of course, after reacquainting myself with the story I think the unresolved issue that intrigues me the most is that both seishirou and subaru have this whole mystery/missing Father figure issue going on and that there are potential half-siblings running around the place xD! Seriously Akechi and Ijuyin should really watch their step when approaching Sei-chan, I doubt he'll like surprises popping out of the woodwork =D!

The memorial service was wonderful and I liked Sei-chan's reaction and view of the situation. Yoshi was as always adorable and secretly evil in the Sei-chan torment :3. All in all, the 2 year edit wait was well worth the wait and I hope that Business As Usual gives you less trouble. I adore the excerpt we got at the end of Family Matters.

Question

Date: 2013-02-18 04:18 (UTC)From: [personal profile] primera
primera: (Default)
Once I finish my reread, I plan to write FM an extensive (and glowing) review-- would you prefer reviews posted at any particular site/location?

Date: 2013-02-22 09:22 (UTC)From: [identity profile] lunewcity.livejournal.com
Thank you for the story, it’s a pleasure to read and reread for the umpteenth time.
I really love your Seishiro, he is much more cosy and accustomed to small everyday pleasures than Subaru. It reminds a bit of Gaiman’s Death who had also much joy of life due to her course of work.
p.s.
Subaru is a major threat to tableware. :) He should buy some nice cups and funny mugs for Seishiro’s collection. Otherwise at this rate Sei-san will run out of them by the end of the year.

Date: 2013-02-23 05:10 (UTC)From: [identity profile] lunewcity.livejournal.com
One per fic is already a lot, considering that the time span isn't large. :) And he's indirectly liable for the whole mess resulting in a hungry Sakura and the broken coffee cup of Sei-san.
It's said that tableware is broken "for luck". If that really works, I hope they have a long life ahead and plenty of time to break the rest.

Date: 2013-02-24 11:37 (UTC)From: [identity profile] lunewcity.livejournal.com
Paper dishes and plastic cups would be very appropriate for uninvited guests ;)

Date: 2013-02-24 14:42 (UTC)From: [identity profile] lunewcity.livejournal.com
Ups, I didn't mean Subaru. And not Omi, who is invited, useful and a good guy in general.
But someday there may be other suicider visitors of the same sort as his granny or Kamui. Even if it's highly unlikely for them to get coffee. ;)

tableware

Date: 2013-02-23 02:36 (UTC)From: [personal profile] primera
primera: (ohoho)
Ironically, I've been hoping that one day, when Seishiro gets too obnoxious, Subaru will finally cave and aim some tableware at his head. A tea cup maybe, or a fork.

Re: tableware

Date: 2013-02-23 05:13 (UTC)From: [identity profile] lunewcity.livejournal.com
That's way too dangerous - there's a risk of making Seishiro one-eyed. Again. Something soft would be a more appropriate weapon. A pillow-fight? :)

Re: tableware

Date: 2013-02-24 11:46 (UTC)From: [identity profile] lunewcity.livejournal.com
Oh yes, he's too considerate. I wonder how he even managed to stay alive in all those Seishiro-less years.

And they'd better specify real-life Western pillows because in a maboroshi Sei-san has an unfair advantage *imagines Subaru buried under a hundred of illusory pillows*
I guess, Sakura would love that, all the snickering and comments, feathers dancing around together with petals... ;)

Re: tableware

Date: 2013-02-24 14:50 (UTC)From: [identity profile] lunewcity.livejournal.com
Evergreen trees are abundant, everhungry is a rarity. ;) It seems that she's craving for attention even more than for a good snack.

Review

Date: 2013-02-23 02:32 (UTC)From: [personal profile] primera
primera: (Sacrifice)
I've followed this story's chapter by chapter postings for a number of years now... I can't believe it's been so long! As a reader, I've greatly enjoyed this work of fanfiction. I have a lot of appreciation for the writer-- appreciation for her work, of course, as well as a certain fan-to-fan appreciation for a fan who will continue to do fanwork for a series that's been abandoned by the creators and whose fandom is pretty dead and scattered. I feel that this deserves some sort of fan medal of honor award. Alas, all I can offer is this humble review! I'm not that great at writing reviews and I don't think I can make it all lovely and fluid, so I'm kind of just gonna go category by category like a 5th grader writing a book report.

THE WRITING
AKK's style is clear and precise. She is descriptive and emotive without being overly florid or ornate. There is a sense of maturity in the writing. Not only is it refreshing to read, but it lends something to the story's tone. I've always felt that, despite being a story in which the supernatural is integral, the tone is very realist (realistic? I am not sure of the best word to use), and the reason is because of the way AKK writes. In a way, I think AKK's style goes very well with the source material. In Tokyo Babylon and X, there is always magic about (and wind-blown sakura petals, nine panels out of ten), and yet the stories always retain a firm foothold in their real world setting. I must also mention that AKK has an awesome penchant for researching everything she incorporates into the story, even little details, which just adds to the story's realistic tone.

THE PLOT
When it comes to Seishiro and Subaru, I've seen plot taken in a lot of different directions, most of them very dark (understandably so). Family Matters is dark, as well, but not completely so. It's most definitely not a "happy" fic, but it's not bleak tragedy either (at least not yet...). The author has crafted a believeable situation in which Seishiro and Subaru are forced to work together for the sake of the balance of the spiritual world, which as we know they both uphold from different sides (if you want to know how this situation comes to be, read the first story, 36°). She has the characters in this situation, and she keeps them in character, and the story unfolds in a sort of reactionary way. One thing leads to another leads to another... Putting Seishiro and Subaru together is like mixing two chemicals-- there's gonna be a reaction. Family Matters is basically the account of the ensuing chemical reaction, which could either end in destruction or balance. To be honest, before I read this fic I could not envision an end for Seishiro and Subaru that wasn't... well, horrible. They are the doomed pair... like Babylon, "destroyed by the wrath of God"... right? But one mustn't forget Hokuto, her hope for them, and her sacrifice. It opens up a world of possibilities. Family Matters is an excellent crafting and exploration of one of those possibilities.

THE CHARACTERIZATION
With Seishiro and Subaru, CLAMP created two really deep, really interesting characters. I've never seen Tokyo Babylon included with other manga in the 'psychological' genre, perhaps because so much is so artfully understated and only hinted at, but I think it has a place there just as much as it does in the 'supernatural' genre. And Family Matters is one of those fics to satisfy the thirst of fans who are craving for things to be delved into and explored when it comes to these two characters. In the end, I don't know what else I can say but that AKK really writes both Seishiro and Subaru very well.

In conclusion, Family Matters: well-written, well-researched, well-plotted, well-characterized. An excellent fanwork.
Edited Date: 2013-02-23 02:39 (UTC)

Re: Review

Date: 2013-02-23 23:49 (UTC)From: [personal profile] primera
primera: (bloom)
You're quite welcome! I think it's well deserved :)

Oh, and I almost forgot to add, I really like the edits you made to the end stretch. I thought it was all just fine before, but now it's just even better.
Edited Date: 2013-02-24 00:02 (UTC)

Date: 2013-10-03 19:37 (UTC)From: [personal profile] killthwight
Can't believe it's taken me this long to come back for the Family Matters final edit. Downloaded 36o and FM for a reread, I can't wait! :)

Date: 2013-10-12 02:33 (UTC)From: [personal profile] killthwight
Left a review for FM over at AO3. Gosh, I can't thank you enough for sharing this fic with us. I enjoyed myself so much reading it again.

I was left wondering a few things though. This time round I was thinking about how Tree-san mentions that the original succession of the Sakurazukamori was either by death of the previous skzm or a spell to transfer over the responsibilities, but that the Mori changed this ritual. Is it too much to expect that by taking the Mori back in hand Seishiro might one day not have to die by his daughter's or someone else's hands? The thought of Seishiro and Subaru growing old is incredibly comforting after all the pain in the original series, and especially sedimented after Nokoru's "gift" to Subaru at the end. Also, I was wondering what would happen to the Sumeragi without Subaru having an heir. Would a cousin take over as the 14th head eventually? Hmm. And considering that the Ijyuin brothers are going to talk to Seishiro about their family ties, will it eventually come out that Ameru is Subaru and Kamui's father? The Dao requires (and indirectly enforces even after the ritual?) an astounding amount of symmetry. Anyway, these are rhetoric questions that lingered after the end of the story.

Once again thank you so much for this fic! I love it to pieces and never get tired of it. :)

Tree-Talk

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