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state of the dreaded "Memorial service of Doom[tm]": completed at 683 words!
Yes, 638 words down from 2000+ after focusing on the plot, the important interactions, and less on the ceremony. Hearing an incantation is fine, reading it not so much! Period.
Now, how to arrange the aftermath...
* Kakyo
* the Twin Star's wish threat
* Kamui's challenge
* Subaru's warning
* ...
tough decisions ahead! Stay tuned. :)
A sharp gush of wind threatened to scatter the fruits and flowers, chosen to represent the five elements and their colors. The candles of Sun and Moon flanking the lamp shook. Somebody needed a reminder...
Yes, 638 words down from 2000+ after focusing on the plot, the important interactions, and less on the ceremony. Hearing an incantation is fine, reading it not so much! Period.
Now, how to arrange the aftermath...
* Kakyo
* the Twin Star's wish threat
* Kamui's challenge
* Subaru's warning
* ...
tough decisions ahead! Stay tuned. :)
A sharp gush of wind threatened to scatter the fruits and flowers, chosen to represent the five elements and their colors. The candles of Sun and Moon flanking the lamp shook. Somebody needed a reminder...
