FM-PMS (state of the edit)

[akk]

Real life had a rather negative impact on my writing over the last few days, nevertheless, the running up to the memorial service is now complete and the actual service is taken shape (albeit not nearly as fast as I would want it). The drastic alterations I reported last time not only held through editing, but definitely added flavor to the mix (not that it needed much after Kotori's grave tree took a certain mirth at Seishiro's soaked collar ;) ). Anyway, here's a small excerpt from Seishiro's pov:

...it was an unregistered grave, because the investigation of the girl's death would have put Destiny's chosen ones in trouble, so someone had faked a death certificate and a cremation to appease authorities. Kind of ironic... The Dragon of Earth produced the body, and Heaven hid it in the woods. If that wasn't teamwork, what was?

(I don't think Subaru would approve of his definition of teamwork, though.)

Comments

[jo_lasalle]

I'm sorry you have what sounds like rather negative developments in real life. :-/

I like the definition of teamwork, though. :-) And 'Heaven hid it in the woords' is very snappy.

[akk]

Actually, the developments in real life are promising at the moment (work related), so it's good. But they gobble up time, leaving less for fic-writing. :)

[jo_lasalle]

Okay, I read that again, and ... I get it better now. :-) At first I thought someone IRL had died! *facepalm*

Promising work related developments: yay!

[akk]

Sorry for startling you. I was too close to reporting on my writing progress to separate content from conditions properly.

Regarding work: wish me luck. At least one decision is to happen within the next three weeks. :)