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Epilogue
Yes, the overhaul of the dreaded chapter 19 is finally finished. This chapter actually saw major rewritings, rearranging the timeline and details of events, including additional scenes closing and refurbishing some of the plot threads insufficiently addressed in the old version.
Most notable changes are:
Expansion of the initial Tree Talk to have it refer to Hokuto's sacrifice and Sado's demise along with the actual yin-yang dynamics between Su & Sei.
Small expansion of Michiko in the shower to account for Seishiro's plans regarding Kyushu section (link to upcoming fic "Business As Usual")
Full rewriting of Seishiro visiting the Tree in Ueno Park. Main focus now: the wakizashi
Full rewriting of Subaru coming home to include a phone talk with Imonoyama concerning Akechi, Kamui's flashbacks, and Nokoru's general concern about their 'disappearance, and Yue serving as the Tree's messenger boy.
Full rewriting of Seishiro spilling the beans about the Mori to account for the changes in the Tree visit scene and the changed mood of the new Subaru coming home scene.
Sizey expansion of DeskSex to include not only Subaru's changed mindset regarding his involvement with the Sakurazukamori, but also a proper closure to go with that mindset.
Partial rewriting of "You slept with Sei" accounting for Nokoru making arrangements for Ijyuin's meeting on Saturday and the appointment having already been made. Also removing Suoh's abysmal other-on-the-phone manners.
...
Overall, I do hope that the Epilogues don't require that much of work. However, given the issues with the Kamui & co. I fear that hope will be futile.
Epilogue
Yes, the overhaul of the dreaded chapter 19 is finally finished. This chapter actually saw major rewritings, rearranging the timeline and details of events, including additional scenes closing and refurbishing some of the plot threads insufficiently addressed in the old version.
Most notable changes are:
Expansion of the initial Tree Talk to have it refer to Hokuto's sacrifice and Sado's demise along with the actual yin-yang dynamics between Su & Sei.
Small expansion of Michiko in the shower to account for Seishiro's plans regarding Kyushu section (link to upcoming fic "Business As Usual")
Full rewriting of Seishiro visiting the Tree in Ueno Park. Main focus now: the wakizashi
Full rewriting of Subaru coming home to include a phone talk with Imonoyama concerning Akechi, Kamui's flashbacks, and Nokoru's general concern about their 'disappearance, and Yue serving as the Tree's messenger boy.
Full rewriting of Seishiro spilling the beans about the Mori to account for the changes in the Tree visit scene and the changed mood of the new Subaru coming home scene.
Sizey expansion of DeskSex to include not only Subaru's changed mindset regarding his involvement with the Sakurazukamori, but also a proper closure to go with that mindset.
Partial rewriting of "You slept with Sei" accounting for Nokoru making arrangements for Ijyuin's meeting on Saturday and the appointment having already been made. Also removing Suoh's abysmal other-on-the-phone manners.
...
Overall, I do hope that the Epilogues don't require that much of work. However, given the issues with the Kamui & co. I fear that hope will be futile.
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