FM-PMS (state of the edit)

[akk]

current frontline: 100/207 (~50%)
to be continued with Interregnum 4

Chapter 10 was a Sumeragi - and accordingly a pain in the ass. Most notably, the scene with Omi & Subaru under the tree. I'm still not entirely happy with it, but I was running the risk of SHIFT-DEL on the file, hence I moved on.
Chapter 11 on the other hand, held only minor things. A couple ofuda-fuda (depends on who thinks of the things). And is "brazen" an opposite to "subtle"? Ah well.

Comments

[effie_chan]

Google tells me that antonyms for brazen are: shy, timid, humble, meek.

For subtle it would be: blatant, obvious.

[akk]

Different context. :-)

subtle behavior.