current chapter word count: 3998
scene structure: Breakfast - Omi's arrival - At the cafe - House visit of Hell - Talk Shop - to Shibaura - exorcism 1 - discovery - exorcism 2 - in the shadow of Rainbow Bridge - Ueno Station - Tree visit [complete, incomplete]
more because Talk shop & exorcism 2 were completed
less because the first part (from Breakfast to Talk Shop) was decluttered and condensed; the second part got more pace with a strengthened (if still incomplete) exorcism 2
amount of chapter complete: 75% (of which 60% are in continuous, tinkered text)
character being slightly less obvious in his kinks: Subaru
character being a better host (of sorts): Seishiro
character getting his drama post mortem: Romiro
and it's all for... the cops.
quote of the day: "You're going to pay for this."
Unrelated side-note: I'm currently watching the Korean drama "Gumiho - the nine tailed fox". While the first two eps with characters and setting being introduced were kind of slow and the fated romance bit felt a bit heavy, since ep 3 that's nicely balanced with action, intrigues and ploys that wouldn't have made sense without the slow stuff before. If you are a fan of urban fantasy, Asian myths, and hardcore police thriller shot through with Romeo & Juliet, go for it! I'm currently at ep 12 and certainly want to know what happens next! Which means, I don't know for sure - and given that I can tell the events in most Western tv shows from the middle of ep 1, that's a big plus in my books! :-)
scene structure: Breakfast - Omi's arrival - At the cafe - House visit of Hell - Talk Shop - to Shibaura - exorcism 1 - discovery - exorcism 2 - in the shadow of Rainbow Bridge - Ueno Station - Tree visit [complete, incomplete]
more because Talk shop & exorcism 2 were completed
less because the first part (from Breakfast to Talk Shop) was decluttered and condensed; the second part got more pace with a strengthened (if still incomplete) exorcism 2
amount of chapter complete: 75% (of which 60% are in continuous, tinkered text)
character being slightly less obvious in his kinks: Subaru
character being a better host (of sorts): Seishiro
character getting his drama post mortem: Romiro
and it's all for... the cops.
quote of the day: "You're going to pay for this."
Unrelated side-note: I'm currently watching the Korean drama "Gumiho - the nine tailed fox". While the first two eps with characters and setting being introduced were kind of slow and the fated romance bit felt a bit heavy, since ep 3 that's nicely balanced with action, intrigues and ploys that wouldn't have made sense without the slow stuff before. If you are a fan of urban fantasy, Asian myths, and hardcore police thriller shot through with Romeo & Juliet, go for it! I'm currently at ep 12 and certainly want to know what happens next! Which means, I don't know for sure - and given that I can tell the events in most Western tv shows from the middle of ep 1, that's a big plus in my books! :-)
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Date: 2010-06-05 22:19 (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2010-06-06 07:02 (UTC)From:As I said, the first one (or probably two) eps aren't that good - too much fated love, soul music and disconnected info. I mostly stayed because I didn't have something else at hand at that time and I got distracted by other stuff frequently, so it didn't bother. But it really got going with ep three and glued me to the screen. I think if my desk chair were more comfortable, I'd have watched the series in one go. ;)
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Date: 2010-06-06 10:06 (UTC)From:Of the one I attempted to watch I vaguely remember a police officer, a secret society of foxes with differing numbers of tails, odd rituals, and blood-smeared faces...? As well as someone getting caught by the police officer? Ah, it's all a blur... and yes, to gain an accurate impression, I should have stuck with it for at least 3 or 4 eps. Many doramas need at least that long to find their feet!
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Date: 2010-06-06 13:20 (UTC)From:My main problem now is: what to watch next. ;)
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Date: 2010-06-06 15:11 (UTC)From:Not sure if this helps, because it's a different kind of thing, but IMO you really can't go wrong with the stellar "A Sleeping Forest": http://community.livejournal.com/jdramas/648821.html
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Date: 2010-06-06 17:03 (UTC)From: