Chapter 18 now stands tall at above 9200 words and returned to ![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
solo.
I like it much better now and there's even a cautious "thumbs-up" after the first half of the chapter. However, the new scene that upped the word count by 1500 words is in the second half, so it may be better not to get excited yet.
solo.I like it much better now and there's even a cautious "thumbs-up" after the first half of the chapter. However, the new scene that upped the word count by 1500 words is in the second half, so it may be better not to get excited yet.
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Date: 2009-10-22 19:00 (UTC)From:Not that I can call myself any less than a very avid fan, your work does deserve the praise it receives, and most likely because your dedication to perfecting your craft precedes you. How's that for a compliment? Do hope it's one that makes you feel good about yourself rather than question my sincerity.
You're marvelous, darling. Just marvelous!
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Date: 2009-10-22 19:19 (UTC)From:2. analysis:
"How's that for a compliment?" Wow. Perfect.
"Do hope it's..." Yes. :)))
"You're marvelous-..." *uhm* *giggle* sorry. It's just a tad too far over the top. ;) And I'm a dar(k)ling with fangs! [outing me as a TopCow fan rather than Marvel here] :D