Chapter 18 now stands tall at above 9200 words and returned to ![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
solo.
I like it much better now and there's even a cautious "thumbs-up" after the first half of the chapter. However, the new scene that upped the word count by 1500 words is in the second half, so it may be better not to get excited yet.
solo.I like it much better now and there's even a cautious "thumbs-up" after the first half of the chapter. However, the new scene that upped the word count by 1500 words is in the second half, so it may be better not to get excited yet.
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Date: 2009-10-22 18:05 (UTC)From:Regarding the inspired muse... not really. The required (or should I say forced?) changes made it easy to put a part back in, which I culled in an earlier streamlining of it.
Somehow, I usually end up to put most of what I tossed out back in in the end (<- somehow this sentence reads confusing to me... eep.).