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current chapter word count: 2064
and that are 307 words less because...? I restructured the scene order to emphasize parallel developments
resulting in Ameru 1 ~ Michiko 1 ~ Ameru 2 ~ Michiko 2 ~ {Omi} ~ Akechi ~ {Imonoyama} (was: Fuma on the phone) [mostly there, incomplete, {completely missing}]
resulting in avoidance of repetitiveness regarding events in chapter 17, avoidance of boring transition stuff, and driving home the SumeraMori point!
characters unexpectedly similar in action: Ameru, Michiko
character who won't get enough sleep: Imonoyama
because of two worried elder brothers and Fuma on the phone!
quote of the day: "...is Subaru!"
and that are 307 words less because...? I restructured the scene order to emphasize parallel developments
resulting in Ameru 1 ~ Michiko 1 ~ Ameru 2 ~ Michiko 2 ~ {Omi} ~ Akechi ~ {Imonoyama} (was: Fuma on the phone) [mostly there, incomplete, {completely missing}]
resulting in avoidance of repetitiveness regarding events in chapter 17, avoidance of boring transition stuff, and driving home the SumeraMori point!
characters unexpectedly similar in action: Ameru, Michiko
character who won't get enough sleep: Imonoyama
because of two worried elder brothers and Fuma on the phone!
quote of the day: "...is Subaru!"
