FM-PMS

[akk]

current chapter word count: 7636
amount of chapter considered tinkered: 100%
then why it's not hauled off to solo already? because...
a) feeling that it might be a tad too fragmented in scene order
b) feeling that I might not be awake enough anymore to judge the aforementioned scene order
c) overall nervousness
d) all of the above
means: tomorrow morning I either like it or start from scratch!

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[solo.insanejournal.com]

... and?

[akk.insanejournal.com]

quite a few red relocation marks. I'll enter them after the last-minute-of-the-year-shopping mom requires of me and send it off to you, then.
No, it's not going to be deleted. I may not be perfect and it may not be the most thrilling of my chapters, but then, I knew that beforehand. Let's hope you don't have to yell at me. :)