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BAUplan - plannings
2019-08-14 19:39No new chapter word count, because all the changes are currently in OneNote (used for "on commute scribbling") and won't be entered into the actual file before the weekend. However, there are some developments I want to stress just right now. Notably:
(because Subaru just wouldn't shut up):
"How can you be so calm about murder in front of you?"
" I've seen countless deaths last year," Subaru answered calmly. "The Final Year didn't end in october, it lasted to the very end of December. I've seen Tokyo flooded and in ruins, felt countless deaths when the evacuation plans couldn't cope, a million spirits screaming, begging for release, far too many to help them all on. All that was reverted when we called the Dao. Destiny changed back to the moment when Seishiro acted to subvert the Final Battle." He met his father's eyes squarely. "You think it doesn't affect me? It does. But I know the alternative. I know what the old man risked to reinstall by his actions against us. And that Seishiro killed him means I won't have to."
- all the remaining scenes saw significant progress since last Sunday, basically leaving finetuning and "writing the proper connections" and then its done (which sounds faster than it is, because "writing connections" can be a horrible tedious, time-consuming task. After all, I want all those scenes to shine...
- part.0 - On Vacation thus has a very definite shape & finish by now that is unlikely to change (again)
- and the next part got a rough outline and its title (part.1 - demons). I won't promise that that won't change, but it fits my current outline perfectly.
- I'm looking forward to writing part.1, because it will include much more of Perv!Tree[tm] and mischievious!Yue
- spiritual spelunking will definitely go into the Outtakes - some time after part.0 is out
(because Subaru just wouldn't shut up):
"How can you be so calm about murder in front of you?"
" I've seen countless deaths last year," Subaru answered calmly. "The Final Year didn't end in october, it lasted to the very end of December. I've seen Tokyo flooded and in ruins, felt countless deaths when the evacuation plans couldn't cope, a million spirits screaming, begging for release, far too many to help them all on. All that was reverted when we called the Dao. Destiny changed back to the moment when Seishiro acted to subvert the Final Battle." He met his father's eyes squarely. "You think it doesn't affect me? It does. But I know the alternative. I know what the old man risked to reinstall by his actions against us. And that Seishiro killed him means I won't have to."
