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After yesterday's writing spree, I noticed this morning that the memorial scene as I wrote it had a serious flaw (as in if I didn't find a more active role for Seishiro, the Twin Star will be the least of Subaru's problems) and the text being tediously slow.
So I basically rewrote it this morning on the train. It's still about the same size, but drastically condensed and the Yin/Yang-Dao structure at the core of the revised mythology in the Decagram takes now the centerpiece of their action (and the altar description no longer appears nailed into the text with a nail gun and super glue!).
Is it finally done?
I'm afraid not. A couple of editing rounds will tell, whether or not the part I have is a-okay now. And then there's the rest of the plot to be entered: Kakyo (and Seiga) have yet to appear and then there's the after ceremony events...
..but we're getting there! Slowly, but surely! :)
So I basically rewrote it this morning on the train. It's still about the same size, but drastically condensed and the Yin/Yang-Dao structure at the core of the revised mythology in the Decagram takes now the centerpiece of their action (and the altar description no longer appears nailed into the text with a nail gun and super glue!).
Is it finally done?
I'm afraid not. A couple of editing rounds will tell, whether or not the part I have is a-okay now. And then there's the rest of the plot to be entered: Kakyo (and Seiga) have yet to appear and then there's the after ceremony events...
..but we're getting there! Slowly, but surely! :)
