2012-03-04

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I've spent the last ten days working on two scenes:, namely Imonoyama's call to Subaru for asking him to do the memorial service for Kotori (because the current Kannushi of her home shrine, sharing body & soul with her murderer just won't do) and Subaru sitting in the bedroom window, contemplating recent developments (namely his feeding Sado to the Sakura, the Sakura accepting his claim of Seishiro's life, Seishiro having children, an upcoming memorial service with both (!) Kamui in attendance, and a certain warning about endangering the realm and facing Sakura tea -and worse- as retaliation).
Especially the 2nd scene results in a more assertive (and more amorous) Subaru to be expressed in the upcoming Seishiro spilling the beans about the Mori scene, which will actually provide for a smooth connection from the Sakura tea threat over spilling the beans to Desk sex (and beyond) without recreating a Subaru-the-worrywart-effect, while forming a smooth plot flow without leaving certain scenes as nothing but blatant authorfan service. *g*

I know this is slow work. Slowest work. Probably real snail mail-worthy (see here for what I mean with real snail mail ^_^), but I believe it is worth the effort. The result is a lot more like the story I had in mind when constructing not only Family Matters, but the Dekagram as a whole.

Unrelated side-note: I got librarian status at Goodreads! You can find me there at http://www.goodreads.com/akk666akk

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