![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
current frontline: unchanged
mainly for two reasons:
1. I played with my new phone (lazy author, no cookie, I know...)
and
2. I need to figure out what to do with the desksex scene in chapter 19. Right now, it feels off, because - let's face it - Subaru had (has?) major qualms about Mariko's role and while he took the decision to fight for his contentment, he's not the guy to just toss all related issues into the garbage bin on the other side of the street.
Get me right, I like the scene, it's needed in terms of symmetry with the previous events at the Sumeragi Estate (before & after, so to speak), so I want to keep it, but it needs to be connected with the rest of the plot - and right now it's not.
And there's still the report Subaru never got around to send to the Sumeragi later the day. I have this vague hunch that the solution lies in or with both details:
Subaru has to fret, has to write the report, and yes, I want them to deflower that desk! (Did I just write 'deflower' in relation to a furniture?! I have to stop reading Ai no Kusabi fanfics...)
Now, I just have to figure out, how to write that.
mainly for two reasons:
1. I played with my new phone (lazy author, no cookie, I know...)
and
2. I need to figure out what to do with the desksex scene in chapter 19. Right now, it feels off, because - let's face it - Subaru had (has?) major qualms about Mariko's role and while he took the decision to fight for his contentment, he's not the guy to just toss all related issues into the garbage bin on the other side of the street.
Get me right, I like the scene, it's needed in terms of symmetry with the previous events at the Sumeragi Estate (before & after, so to speak), so I want to keep it, but it needs to be connected with the rest of the plot - and right now it's not.
And there's still the report Subaru never got around to send to the Sumeragi later the day. I have this vague hunch that the solution lies in or with both details:
Subaru has to fret, has to write the report, and yes, I want them to deflower that desk! (Did I just write 'deflower' in relation to a furniture?! I have to stop reading Ai no Kusabi fanfics...)
Now, I just have to figure out, how to write that.
