current chapter word count: 8233
scenes played with today: Tree Talk (yet again), Mr. T. (which might still need more work)
amount of chapter considered fit for editing now: ~ 60 %
things changed: less obvious hints in the intro; and tossing out the paper proof to maintain public deniability and put more focus on the influence
character no longer listing the downsides: Subaru
character being too accommodating: Seishiro
character being disturbed by that: Tree-san
quote of the day: "Doesn't your pet suffice?"
typo of the day: Sakurazuka-Sam (counted at least thrice in the last paragraph. Once again, and I might have to come up with something involving either a Maltese falcon or Casablanca.)
scenes played with today: Tree Talk (yet again), Mr. T. (which might still need more work)
amount of chapter considered fit for editing now: ~ 60 %
things changed: less obvious hints in the intro; and tossing out the paper proof to maintain public deniability and put more focus on the influence
character no longer listing the downsides: Subaru
character being too accommodating: Seishiro
character being disturbed by that: Tree-san
quote of the day: "Doesn't your pet suffice?"
typo of the day: Sakurazuka-Sam (counted at least thrice in the last paragraph. Once again, and I might have to come up with something involving either a Maltese falcon or Casablanca.)