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current chapter word count: 7557
because of tinkered grannyS and expanded cop scenes (the latter of which might be tightened later on)
character more obsessed with face than with dirt: grannyS
character more obsessed with dirt than with face: Subaru
character who accepts easily a bit of both: Ameru (*eg*!)
scene which absolutely has to go into the next interregnum: two raunchy elders hackling and gossiping about the blessings of properly hidden filth!
quote of the day: "And believe me, those two *were* associated."
additional note: it's unlikely that I get this chapter done till Sunday (sadly). There are still too many spots I want to be more poignant, less wordy, more tactile & directly told, and so on...
...but it's really making progress now!
because of tinkered grannyS and expanded cop scenes (the latter of which might be tightened later on)
character more obsessed with face than with dirt: grannyS
character more obsessed with dirt than with face: Subaru
character who accepts easily a bit of both: Ameru (*eg*!)
scene which absolutely has to go into the next interregnum: two raunchy elders hackling and gossiping about the blessings of properly hidden filth!
quote of the day: "And believe me, those two *were* associated."
additional note: it's unlikely that I get this chapter done till Sunday (sadly). There are still too many spots I want to be more poignant, less wordy, more tactile & directly told, and so on...
...but it's really making progress now!
