FM-PMS (2)

current chapter word count: 8103
reason for that: Ameru is probably more interesting when alive
amount of continuously tinkered text in chapter: 40%
research of the day: cheap Ryokan in Kyoto, suffixes used for sons
quote of the day: Nobody had told him that she'd been injured.

FM-PMS

current chapter word count: 7636
amount of chapter considered tinkered: 100%
then why it's not hauled off to solo already? because...
a) feeling that it might be a tad too fragmented in scene order
b) feeling that I might not be awake enough anymore to judge the aforementioned scene order
c) overall nervousness
d) all of the above
means: tomorrow morning I either like it or start from scratch!

FM-PMS

current chapter word count: 7636
amount of chapter considered tinkered: 100%
then why it's not hauled off to solo already? because...
a) feeling that it might be a tad too fragmented in scene order
b) feeling that I might not be awake enough anymore to judge the aforementioned scene order
c) overall nervousness
d) all of the above
means: tomorrow morning I either like it or start from scratch!