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current chapter word count: 7172
it's shorter because I severely decluttered the text!
resulting in a more agitated Granny Talk 2, a more poignant Akiko confrontation, and -finally- a Where-are-the-hands-scene conveying the anger, the madness and the resolve (without being repetitive for other events in this chapter & earlier WATH-scenes in this fic)!
Plus, I finally found an appropriate summary line for the chapter.
it's shorter because I severely decluttered the text!
resulting in a more agitated Granny Talk 2, a more poignant Akiko confrontation, and -finally- a Where-are-the-hands-scene conveying the anger, the madness and the resolve (without being repetitive for other events in this chapter & earlier WATH-scenes in this fic)!
Plus, I finally found an appropriate summary line for the chapter.
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