current chapter word count: 6665
scribbled changes applied today: altered beginning of breakfast scene
resulting in denser flow of events, better continuity, daylight sex
scribbled changes completed? no, too many of them to do
character still being too contemplative: Seishiro
character still being too carefree: Subaru (but he is getting better)
character about to give a behavioral lecture: grannyS (and she's not even aware of the Kali-incident yet)
quote of the day: "An impressive estate. Especially the gardens... beautiful Nadeshiko."
scribbled changes applied today: altered beginning of breakfast scene
resulting in denser flow of events, better continuity, daylight sex
scribbled changes completed? no, too many of them to do
character still being too contemplative: Seishiro
character still being too carefree: Subaru (but he is getting better)
character about to give a behavioral lecture: grannyS (and she's not even aware of the Kali-incident yet)
quote of the day: "An impressive estate. Especially the gardens... beautiful Nadeshiko."