FM-PMS

[akk]

current chapter word count: 4922
characters still ignored completely: Sorata & Sakura (now, that's a pairing!)
number of scenes accidentally written for Interregnum 4: 2
number of lines accidentally written for chapter 12: 2
note to self (1): never write religious ceremonies from a spectator's pov when your mind is bent on sex
note to self (2): avoid Seishiro's perspective when he has time to contemplate (see 1)

Comments

[vehemence.livejournal.com]

Sorata and Sakura? Tell that to Arashi xD
... Wait, Sakura is gonna be in this fic?! I totally didn't expect that, omg. CCS!Sakura or TRC!Sakura?

gngnghmnhg gosh you make me want this chapter so bad. 4922 words means it's almost done yes? :D?

[akk]

Sakura Tree. I never care much for Toya's sister in CCS, and I don't like TRC that much.

[vehemence.livejournal.com]

Ohhhh. I should have realized that, but I've been reading TRC all day so my mind just immediately jumped to her xD

[akk]

Whereas I have a hard time reminding that there is (are) a female character of that name. CCS I have a bit on my radar (because I'm a Yue fan), but the artwork of TRC and xxxHolic just put me off.

btw. almost done? No way. Probably 2/3 (at most)! The plot defines the size of a chapter to some degree, and despite all the raunchy comments there is quite a lot of important content in 11. :)

[vehemence.livejournal.com]

Ya I also highly prefer CLAMP's older art to their new style. I actually only started reading TRC because I heard that Seishiro and Subaru and the X gang make some appearances.

LOL. Don't worry, raunchy comments won't make me forget about the plot xD I probably come off as a big blob of fangirly perversion, but I love your story for many other reasons besides the great sex XD And yay 2/3 there!

[akk]

"Seishiro and Subaru and the X gang make some appearances."
True, but they aren't drawn any prettier than the rest of the story.

sheesh, don't remind me. I still have to describe an exorcism ceremony through Seishiro's eyes, and the guy just doesn't stay on topic!