BAUplan - On Vacation - State of the Edit

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I received the corrections this afternoon. After the first scrolling, it looks like I have to rewrite one scene (arrival in Naha; currently 1/4 of a page, likely going to be 1/2 page in the end), some clarifications / shortening of descriptions, and a scattering of false German friends. That's really not much for a chapter this size. :)))

So, tentatively, barring any surprises / untoward events...

...I may be able to post it next week.