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I finally got to the actual battle scenes (and realized there is WAY TOO MUCH text for it to have the effect I want), hence: CUT CUT CUTTEDICUT. Am now basically going from "storming the asteroid" to "Doc's programs to the rescue" in less than one page!
The usual issues with editing an old text:
(a) was my English really THAT bad back then? and
(b) *whine* I loved those cut scenes somewhat fierce!
The usual issues with editing an old text:
(a) was my English really THAT bad back then? and
(b) *whine* I loved those cut scenes somewhat fierce!
