FM-PMS (state of the edit)

[akk]

current frontline: 195/210
Epilogue

So far it looks as if

• the Epilogues A & B will be merged


• Su insists on having the meeting at home to begin with, so no cafe (to make a point about the changed situation)!


• Omi finished his jobs, so no joint venture at the shipyard (too big a detour from plot)!


• ...a lot more to be done with the scenes at the campus (for accommodating the changes made in chapter 19. I'll determine those when I get there.)

So much for not doing a full rewrite on this one... *sheesh*