BAUplan - On Vacation > off to editing

pre-edit chapter word count: 20651 words on 40 A4 pages (with some footnotes and playful formatting; I hope, Solo will forgive those - playing with stuff helped with figuring out content).
number of major outtakes produced along the way: 1 (spiritual spelunking)
major deviations from planned plot: 1 (Ameru spilling the beans)

I'm sending it to solo today.
Hopefully, there's time for editing in the foreseeable future (but I don't know yet); also I hope that it won't be too stressful to turn this into something readable with recognizable characters. *eeeep*
On the plus side: I already have plans and scenes for part.1 - Demons in my head. :)

final writing quote of part.0:
They could have died side by side last year without ever knowing.
Subaru dug his hand into the sand and balled an angry fist.
"If that's how you feel about a day at the beach, you're doing it wrong," Seishiro, lying on a large beach towel beside him, commented dryly

Babylon (2019) - バビロン - anime recommendation

Start-up summary that doesn't give too much away:

Zen Seizaki of the Tokyo District Prosecutor's office stumbles upon a conspiracy involving a pharmaceutical company, a mysterious woman, and a political conundrum centered around suicides and the new district to be established in Western Tokyo.

The art work is decent. The subtitles (I used the German ones) are ok. The plot... WOW! (so far). I just finished ep.03 (streamed on Amazon) and am eagerly awaiting ep.4 (supposed to come next week). One of the things that caught my attention is that its based in today's Tokyo, with settings I recognized from the Mori bits in Family Matters, i.e. Kasumigaseki etc.
While a lot of the plot is criminal investigations, including interviews, etc. so far - there is a dark mystery / horror note throughout the tale that makes me wonder where the series is heading.

https://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclopedia/anime.php?id=20775