BAUplan - polishing
2019-09-22 16:50current chapter word count: 19721
pages deemed ready for edit: 36/38
issue (1) left to solve: covering a burnt shikifuku more elegantly, thus installing Kyushu section's new COO and local liaison (the current version of that scene just reads "bumpy")
issue (2) left to solve: contemplating the beach recommendation (after I cut the actual recommendation from an earlier scene, it needs to get back in, or there will be an untied thread. I - and the Sakura - dislike untied threads!)
character about to wonder if inattention spells are reliable enough to wear an embarrassingly orange emergency coverall back to the hotel (or even forgoing that coverall altogether): Subaru
character seriously considering ditching a job that requires "bringing replacement suits in case of blood stains": Ameru
quote of the day:
"It's exceedingly rare for my books to bleed on me."
pages deemed ready for edit: 36/38
issue (1) left to solve: covering a burnt shikifuku more elegantly, thus installing Kyushu section's new COO and local liaison (the current version of that scene just reads "bumpy")
issue (2) left to solve: contemplating the beach recommendation (after I cut the actual recommendation from an earlier scene, it needs to get back in, or there will be an untied thread. I - and the Sakura - dislike untied threads!)
character about to wonder if inattention spells are reliable enough to wear an embarrassingly orange emergency coverall back to the hotel (or even forgoing that coverall altogether): Subaru
character seriously considering ditching a job that requires "bringing replacement suits in case of blood stains": Ameru
quote of the day:
"It's exceedingly rare for my books to bleed on me."