current chapter word count: 19657
chapter condition: continuous text throughout; all scenes fitting and flowing; two rough spots left, requiring a bit more polishing (added details; more concise wording, etc. pp. - the content is fine, the presentation of it could be better) Seems like the estimate of a 20k words before editing part.0 holds.
unreliable scheduling: 1 - 2 weeks until editing (whenever
solo has time, and real life [tm] doesn't get in the way).
character wishing for a less damaged shikifuku: Subaru
character having doubts about his new employer(s): Ameru
quote of the day (1):
Seishiro strode forward, studying the raging flames behind an invisible wall. "Nicely contained," he remarked casually to Miyagi. "Didn't even trigger the sprinkler system. But really, Mitsuru. Semtex? Isn't that a tad profane?"
quote of the day (2):
"We had the luxury of hating them for what they do, because they did their job."
quote of the day (3):
"Sorry to have kept you waiting," he said with a self-deprecating smile at Subaru, "I had to fill out the paperwork first."
"Paperwork?" Ameru gaped.
"Of course. Did you think I can complete an order without handing in proper documentation?" Seishiro shook his head. "Valid order or not. I have to make my case or I'm in trouble."
"I believe this case was straightforward," Subaru said dryly.
"Allowed for a one-liner in the justification." Seishiro shrugged.
chapter condition: continuous text throughout; all scenes fitting and flowing; two rough spots left, requiring a bit more polishing (added details; more concise wording, etc. pp. - the content is fine, the presentation of it could be better) Seems like the estimate of a 20k words before editing part.0 holds.
unreliable scheduling: 1 - 2 weeks until editing (whenever
character wishing for a less damaged shikifuku: Subaru
character having doubts about his new employer(s): Ameru
quote of the day (1):
Seishiro strode forward, studying the raging flames behind an invisible wall. "Nicely contained," he remarked casually to Miyagi. "Didn't even trigger the sprinkler system. But really, Mitsuru. Semtex? Isn't that a tad profane?"
quote of the day (2):
"We had the luxury of hating them for what they do, because they did their job."
quote of the day (3):
"Sorry to have kept you waiting," he said with a self-deprecating smile at Subaru, "I had to fill out the paperwork first."
"Paperwork?" Ameru gaped.
"Of course. Did you think I can complete an order without handing in proper documentation?" Seishiro shook his head. "Valid order or not. I have to make my case or I'm in trouble."
"I believe this case was straightforward," Subaru said dryly.
"Allowed for a one-liner in the justification." Seishiro shrugged.