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Editing CS5: I finally got past the Eliza goes home scene (including Doc's famous restoration of GV), though it will still see a check-through on paper. Next will be new stuff with Walsh, Subadar and politics. Finally!
CS5 now stands at 15 edited pages with a total of 32, which is likely to fluctuate widely since I'm cutting stuff, restructuring the rest, and adding new threads (politics / Subadar) to give the plot a more firm footing. Stay tuned.
"Don't sweat it. People are still too party-brained to make trouble, anyway." He suddenly sidestepped Zach and, with a broad smile on his face, tapped at an imaginary hat. "Was nice to meet you, Mrs. F. You really ought to wear all his shirts—"
"Doc!" Zach snapped.
"—they are looking much better on you than on him."
CS5 now stands at 15 edited pages with a total of 32, which is likely to fluctuate widely since I'm cutting stuff, restructuring the rest, and adding new threads (politics / Subadar) to give the plot a more firm footing. Stay tuned.
"Don't sweat it. People are still too party-brained to make trouble, anyway." He suddenly sidestepped Zach and, with a broad smile on his face, tapped at an imaginary hat. "Was nice to meet you, Mrs. F. You really ought to wear all his shirts—"
"Doc!" Zach snapped.
"—they are looking much better on you than on him."
