Galaxy Rangers Edits - Mission Report 20

Editing Crystal Structures makes progress (a little). Ham-handed decluttering removed 9 pages, bringing the current page count down to 36. The obnoxiously complicated way to find the killer was simplified, splitting the achievement equally between Goose and Doc and removing O'Mega and OPS firmly from the equation.
It also removed some of the nicer fanservice scenes, so now I have to be careful to retain continuity with later affairs, but I think getting rid of the chaos and the emo is worth that risk.

"Goose-my-man," Doc muttered. "Sometimes you're too smart for your own good."