current chapter word count: 2912 (+1190)
scene worked upon: actually, I added and adjusted stuff throughout the part for a much more fluent read
what's missing? Shang Namie still needs to be warned off and the discussion about the meeting and the touristy stuff to do as decoy next didn't happen so far
character now very much more "there": Subaru
character still put off by an orange shirt: also Subaru
character considering a pet alligator: Seishiro (because of that shirt)
quote of the day: "I usually book into the Crowne Harbor. It busts Miyagi's budget for three months straight!"
scene worked upon: actually, I added and adjusted stuff throughout the part for a much more fluent read
what's missing? Shang Namie still needs to be warned off and the discussion about the meeting and the touristy stuff to do as decoy next didn't happen so far
character now very much more "there": Subaru
character still put off by an orange shirt: also Subaru
character considering a pet alligator: Seishiro (because of that shirt)
quote of the day: "I usually book into the Crowne Harbor. It busts Miyagi's budget for three months straight!"