FM-PMS (state of the edit)

The new chapter 20 consists of

1. breakfast sans shikifuku
2. "the other decent"
3. siblings in the bath
4. ignored objections
5. gravetree observations
6. service
7. unexpected announcements
8. Kamui, Seishiro, Kamui, and ice cream
9. attendees farewells
10. Nokoru and won't save you!

Points 8 - 10 still need work, the rest is smooth as a song.

The new epilogue consists only of

1. Omi's house visit of Hell (shortened)
2. architect annoyance with Kamui
3. message in the garden

I have a lot of well defined text for all three scenes, and merely have to attune mood, settings, and transitions.

schedule (tentatively): If writing stays as smooth as it was these last days, I hope to get the file to solo within 2012's holiday season (but no guarantees). We're talking about approx. 150.000 words here!

And then I'll continue with their trip to Okinawa! :)

quote of the day: "You were supposed to predict the Earth's future, not to peep into my sister's dreams!"