2012-01-29

akk: (SeiSub - hungry kiss)
current frontline: 195/206
Epilogue

The now merged epilogue lost at least four pages due to Omi having completed the tasks given to Subaru and being forced to have the meeting at Seishiro's house from the very beginning. (No, he is not happy about that!) Thanks to this, the elaborate detour to the harbor is gone (maybe I make it a sidestory sometime in the not-so-foreseeable future).

What remains is basically the Akechi/Ijyuin/Subaru/Kamui/Seishiro/TwinStarFuma showdown, which will also seen quite some drastic changes placing more focus on
1) Kotori's obit (the new reason why K&TSF actually appear on campus)
2) Nokoru pulling all the strings to keep everything Akechi away from Seishiro
3) Kamui's issues with the TSF *and* his mental leftovers from last year
and last (likely not least)
4) Kamui's aftermath visit at the house needs a redo to accommodate the required changes before (and to tie it better with the planned sequel).

Right now, I'm tempted to have another "office scene" thrown in, but I'm doing my utmost to refrain from that. No detours! Bad author! No cookie!

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