current chapter word count: 4796
scene worked on today: The Twin Star's gamble, the Twin Star's assessment
scene done? TSG: yes. TSA: not quite. The balance between surroundings and events, talk and description isn't right yet (and Kamui might get his 5 minutes with Subaru, after all)
character finally getting involved in events: Subaru and Kamui
character being part of the scene as a his canon!self: Suoh (finally!)
character staying removed: Nokoru (it works better without him *and* adds a nice twist to the final note)
quote of the day: "Experience."
scene worked on today: The Twin Star's gamble, the Twin Star's assessment
scene done? TSG: yes. TSA: not quite. The balance between surroundings and events, talk and description isn't right yet (and Kamui might get his 5 minutes with Subaru, after all)
character finally getting involved in events: Subaru and Kamui
character being part of the scene as a his canon!self: Suoh (finally!)
character staying removed: Nokoru (it works better without him *and* adds a nice twist to the final note)
quote of the day: "Experience."