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current chapter word count: 4351
less, because Stairway to...? was completely remodeled and tightened
resulting in Subaru being in character & the focus being back on the events in Family Matters rather than on stuff that might become interesting in Business As Usual (or not).
more, because You can trust me gained a few lines connecting it properly with the content in Five days later
number of scenes still not what I want them to be: 3 (The Consultation, The Twin Star's gamble, and You can trust me).
amount of chapter considered done for good: 60%
character still lacking depth: Twin Star Fuma
character still lacking a point: Kamui
issues still unaddressed: Kotori's grave (have a solution for it), Akechi's violation of his patient's privacy (have probably a solution for it), the Twin Star's assessment (have no idea yet).
quote of the day: "That is an intended side-effect."
less, because Stairway to...? was completely remodeled and tightened
resulting in Subaru being in character & the focus being back on the events in Family Matters rather than on stuff that might become interesting in Business As Usual (or not).
more, because You can trust me gained a few lines connecting it properly with the content in Five days later
number of scenes still not what I want them to be: 3 (The Consultation, The Twin Star's gamble, and You can trust me).
amount of chapter considered done for good: 60%
character still lacking depth: Twin Star Fuma
character still lacking a point: Kamui
issues still unaddressed: Kotori's grave (have a solution for it), Akechi's violation of his patient's privacy (have probably a solution for it), the Twin Star's assessment (have no idea yet).
quote of the day: "That is an intended side-effect."
