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current chapter word count: 4741
less, because a change of pov allowed to get rid of most of the unnecessary clutter in "The Consultation", while allowing to give the missing tidbit of important information to Nokoru in plain sight.
revised scene structure: Sakura at Night - Nokoru manip Sei - Not a bet - The Consultation: Preamble - Psychosomatic kekkailessness? - The Consultation: Don't - Stairway to--? - The Twin Star's gamble - You can trust me - Five days later: Subaru and Kamui - Five days later: Seishiro and the Tree [complete, gappy]
character regaining some depth (and a drink): Seishiro
character wishing for something stronger: Nokoru
character crossing verbal blades with Subaru: Twin Star Fuma
unappreciated event: Sun Plaza
quote of the day: "Near Rainbow Bridge? Probably, it's psychosomatic."
less, because a change of pov allowed to get rid of most of the unnecessary clutter in "The Consultation", while allowing to give the missing tidbit of important information to Nokoru in plain sight.
revised scene structure: Sakura at Night - Nokoru manip Sei - Not a bet - The Consultation: Preamble - Psychosomatic kekkailessness? - The Consultation: Don't - Stairway to--? - The Twin Star's gamble - You can trust me - Five days later: Subaru and Kamui - Five days later: Seishiro and the Tree [complete, gappy]
character regaining some depth (and a drink): Seishiro
character wishing for something stronger: Nokoru
character crossing verbal blades with Subaru: Twin Star Fuma
unappreciated event: Sun Plaza
quote of the day: "Near Rainbow Bridge? Probably, it's psychosomatic."
