current chapter word count: 2826 (of which 326 are new words!)
scene rewritten today: Kamui's drop-in & "You want this!"
scene done? yes! (and this time for good!)
amount of chapter done: ~33% (discounting tinkering and ignoring probable plot changes in the yet-to-be-written parts)
resulting in a determined, somewhat caring, dewhined Kamui (and the removal of all embarrassing sentences save the Korea reference).
character getting better in constructive fretting: Kamui
character getting a wake-up call about twisted wishes: also Kamui
character with a peculiar viewpoint on absolutes: Subaru (geee... I wonder from whom he caught that! ;) )
quote of the day: "But it can't go on forever!"
scene rewritten today: Kamui's drop-in & "You want this!"
scene done? yes! (and this time for good!)
amount of chapter done: ~33% (discounting tinkering and ignoring probable plot changes in the yet-to-be-written parts)
resulting in a determined, somewhat caring, dewhined Kamui (and the removal of all embarrassing sentences save the Korea reference).
character getting better in constructive fretting: Kamui
character getting a wake-up call about twisted wishes: also Kamui
character with a peculiar viewpoint on absolutes: Subaru (geee... I wonder from whom he caught that! ;) )
quote of the day: "But it can't go on forever!"